I watched helplessly as my very sister was being tortured.

This a dramatic way to start a story huh.  You try this sometime.  Okay, back to the drama.

My father soared through the air as I watched.  Then we attacked.  Angie yelped in pain as my dad crashed down on her.  All at once the horror happened.  He started his tickle assault.  

I watched helplessly as my very sister was being tortured.  (Yes you guessed it that was the beginning) I had to help.  I jumped slamming down onto the tramp.  My sister (no longer being attacked)  flew into the air.  My dad noticing me, charged at me.  I too yelped and ran for cover.  But to no avail.  I would to fight back.

"Ah!" I screamed as dad slammed into me beginning the onslaught.  I started to thrash out violently yelling all the while.  And as it had begun it end.  Dad left me there crippled and on the brink of shedding tears.  

THE END