Star Trek Review

Wow! This movie is amazing! The special effects are outstanding. It takes you on a mission with Captain Kirk. It pulled me into the movie in the first minutes! It will seem to take you into the movie and on the voyage. Very well done by the cast and all who helped out in this incredible show! I was able to see this show twice. I love it! They crew made the ships and all the computers so incredible. I couldn't believe how good this movie was!

Chapter 10

The roar of the monsters drowned out the calls of his companies. All at once a huge figure rose out of the ground twenty feet from the castle.
"If you wish to live surrender the boy!" The creature screamed at them
"We will protect him and this castle until death!" Splitter yelled back
"Then, you have sealed your fate." It said, shrinking back into the earth
The rose up again but this time it was by Dem The Great. It seemed to be talking to him. He pointed to Stan. It was followed by a blood curdling horn blast. The first rank of what looked like goblins marched forwards, towards the castle.
Another horn blast followed by to short blasts rose into the air. The goblins broke out into a sprint.
"Stan lets move, now!" Splitter's voice rang out
He spun on his heels and ran after Splitter. Running through a hallway by his room. Splitter stopped by the huge metal door next to his room.
"I was wondering what is in there." Stan blurted out
"It is the tower. We keep all are weapons and things in here. Pull that sting over there." Splitter said rummaging though a small bookshelf. Stan pulled the nearly invisible string. There was a creak and the metal door swung open. Splitter ran in and came out before Stan could move.
"Pull it again. That's it." He said, Stan yanked on the string and the door slammed shut, locks clicking in place. Splitter started running off again. Struggling to keep up Stan rounded a corner and into the same room had first laid eyes on.
Glam, Cashek, Splitter, and Barney were already there. Wielding a longsword in the right hand Splitter handed out weapons. Glam the first received a large battle axe. Cashek next in command got a small dagger and a bow and arrows. Lastly Barney acquired a curved short sword.
All wore identical robes. Long and torn at the bottom, with a symbol of a dragon blowing fire at a knight. One half of the robe had blue streaks going down and the other with red streaks. Glam's dark brown hair and eyes glittered in the raising sun.
"To the front gate!" Glam yelled
"Hey, don't I get robes and a sword?" Stan asked
"No, you have the sword of destiny and the robes kalsar the mystical wizard." Splitter responded
"Oh, okay." Stan said quietly
"Now, lets go kill us some monsters!" He yelled running out of the room
"More running can't we walk." Stan said to himself running after Splitter
Stan ran to the the front gate were of course everyone else was. Holding the gate closed Glam kept yelling in that silly language. While everyone else tried without luck to bar it shut. Stan sat dumb founded as the goblin' swords pushed thought gate.
"Stan move over there the goblins will be thought at any moment." Cashek yelled pointing at a large stack of bricks.
Stan walked over to the bricks watching to see the first goblin go down. Out of nowhere a loud bang rattled the gate. Two more hits slammed into the gate. There was a loud 'crack' and gate tumbled to the floor, sending Glam sprawling.
The attack on The Great Castle had begun.

Chapter 9

Stan into Ren's face thinking. What if he was just mislead. He took the thought out of his head right then. Ren had tried to kill him, with magic. The language Ren kept yelling seemed familiar to him. It sounded like he was saying "die" in the language.
The ground did explode when he was dodging. It had looked like a ray.
"Maybe, I can use the spell." He said to himself "Die!"
There was a spark but nothing else. He starred down at his hand, willing it to do something better. He looked up to see Ren's body vanish. He glared at the spot and hopped he was seeing things. After blinking a couple times, it was still gone. He remembered the walkie-talkie lying on the table.
"Splitter, Glam. Does anyone hear me!" He yelled into the mouth piece
"Stan, is that you?" A voice responded
"Yes, I am in the Keep and need help." Stan said, trying to stay calm.
"I will be down in a moment." The voice said
Glam appeared moments later. Behind him emerged Barney and Cashek. The triplet ran at him.
"What happened, nothing seems wrong." Barney asked glancing around.
"Ren attacked me a minute ago." Stan responded
"Where is he then." Cashek asked
"His body vanished in thin air." He said
Glam yelled something in a different language. Pacing and yelling Glam, stopped and starred at the doorway.
"This is the doorway he vanished from?" Glam Whispered
Stan nodded turning towards the door. Glam was crouched moving slowly to the tube in which Splitter had gone. He jumped in the tube and like Splitter vanished. Barney moved to the tube also entering.
"Are you coming?" Cashek asked
"Yeah, but can you get my sword out of that crate?" Stan said
Cashek whirled around and looked at the sword pointing out. He walked over to the crate. Grabbing hold of the hilt he tugged and the sword slipped out. Stan took it and followed Cashek into the tube.
As before it twist and turned. Flipping him around. Minutes passed, he found himself on hard floor again. He stood and looked over at Cashek. He seemed to be looking at something over the castle walls.
He turned and saw why everyone was assembled. In the distance an army of creatures had come. Demons of all shapes and sizes rose out of the ground. Dog looking creatures paced the perimeter of the front lines. In the back a man stepped into the crowd of Demons.
"That there is Dem The Great." Splitter whispered.

Transformers Revenge Of The Fallen Review

'Transformers 2' was one of the worst movies I have been able to see.  Sitting in the theater with my family.  I didn't feel comfortable in my on seat.  In the first twenty minutes of the movie there was more swearing then Terminator Salvation had in the whole movie.  Also there was a lot of unneeded things in the movie.  

It was a prolonged show.  It was about two and a half hours long.  Unlike 'Transformers 1' its battles ranged any where from five-seven minutes.  The original movies battles were ten-twenty minutes.  Which made the movie more exciting.  The new one there was to much bodies fling through the air.  I say if you are going to see it wait to see it in the dollar theater.

I hope this helped anyone out there!

Terminator Salvation Review

I went to Terminator Salvation.  It was a pretty good movie other than the Terminators didn't terminate.  One scene 'John Connor' got thrown around for about a minute.  He then stood up and blew the things head off.  It was as if he wasn't injured at all.  The Terminator motto is: search, acquire, terminate.

Other then that it had amazing special effects.  Also the Terminators were incredible and cool.  Enjoy!

Chapter 8

Splitter stood stunned.  Starring into space fixed on Stan. 

"Stay here, Stan."  Splitter said

The next thing he knew Splitter was gone, down a tube that looked like his own.  Stan glanced around the room.  A little bit worried he searched for a weapon of so kind.  He needed to get something to defend himself with.  Just in case.  

Tucked away in a corner was a sheath.  Thinking there would be a sword he lifted it up.  Peering in to it.  There was nothing inside or around where he found it. 

Splitter's voice rag out through the room,"Looking for this."

Stan whirled around.  Splitter stood in the doorway wielding a massive sword.  

"I will be fair, here catch."  He said tossing the sword.

Stan jumped to the side just in time.  Slitter seemed to have melted into the ground.  Stan starred at the puddle of colorful liquid.  It bubbled and melted upwards.  Turning into Ren in the doorway.

"Miss me."  He said

Stan looked over at the sword that had nearly killed him.  It sat sticking out of a crate two feet from where he stood.  Ren yelled something and the nearest crate to him exploded.  he ducked and ran to the sword.

Ren roared in anger and yelled yet another spell incantation.  The floor boiled under his feet and erupted from underneath.  Stan was sent into the and crashing down on a crate.  His back ached.  Stan jumped and his back screaming in pain.  Spinning he grabbed hold of the sword and pulled.  

"I hope you know that the sword is a foot within the crate.  Also surrounded by steel.  You can't get it out."  Ren yelled in mid laugh

Stan rolled behind a metal object.  The ground exploding.  

"Come out I want to see you!"  Ren screamed in rage.

The ground again exploding.  He glanced around the room and in is small safe spot.  A foot to his right sat a small knife.  He picked it up nearly throwing it away.  It was about four inches long and weighed about an ounce.  

He stood taking aim at Ren.

"Are you going to throw that at me?"  Ren laughed

Stan saw a chance.  He aimed again and let it fly.  Ren tried to dodge but the knife had already struck home.  It drove deep into his chest.  He winced in pain, gave his last small chuckle, and rolled onto his back.

"I am sorry Ren, but you left no other option."  Stan whispered to Ren's blank face.  

Guess what tomorrow i am going to get ready to go to Timberline.  

Oh so I was walking around and my friends picked me up and we drove to the movie theater.  We went to see star trek.  I was really exited to see it for my second time this summer.  we drove in and found the perfect spot.  Get this there was only a couple cars in the parking lot.  Me and they ran up to the booth finding it empty.  IT WAS CLOSED.  NO!